（一）:润色（1）
take on the role of a for the ACS and give your on my paper.
since your is , in order to save space， use for the parts you don’t think need to be .
Note that in to the , also which and have been in the .
use the More , , , , ,
Make as few as
to the style of the ACS
the paper is so long, I will only give you a small , and I will tell you where that small is in the paper each time, and you will only have to touch up that small each time.
think and be sure to , okay?
输出1：
Sure, I can a of your paper for the ACS . the you would like me to focus on, and I will make the while to the ‘s for , , , , , .
The is a : the of , the coke in the of bio-oil, an in bio-oil from 。 , the and of coke the (HDO) of bio-oil are based on 。 (ⅰ) Two paths to the coke of were out by DFT on the of and on Pt-Pd (111)。
The rate- was C-H (sp2) bond on the ring (S20→S21 and S24→S29)。 (ⅱ) on the of six noble , we that the of C-H (sp2) bond on the ring (S20→S21) could be used as a of coke , which was in good with the TG of coke。 (ⅲ) The of the , d-band and the of the , could be used as for the 。
, the of free based on the , we found that the the rate- by 0。47 eV。 Still, the the rate- by 0。60 eV。 (ⅳ) The of the atom on the ring and free , the of C-H (sp2) bond on the ring (S20→S21) still has under the of free 。 These are for the and of anti- for HDO of bio-oil。
输出2：
The to be well- and a clear of the study’s and . , there are to the and make it more , , and . Based on ‘s , I have made the while the and :
In the of bio-oil, the of (PAHs) – a coke – a in bio-oil from . In this study, we aimed to the and of coke the of bio-oil using (DFT) . , we out two paths to the coke of by the of and on Pt-Pd (111) (I). The rate- was the of the C-H (sp2) bond on the ring (S20→S21 and S24→S29).
To the , we that the of C-H (sp2) bond on the ring (S20→S21) could be used as a of coke , which was in good with the (TG) of coke (II). , we found that the of the , such as the d-band and the of the , could be used as for the . Using these , we the of free and found that the the rate- by 0.47 eV, while the it by 0.60 eV (III).
Our of a the atom on the ring and free , that the of C-H (sp2) bond on the ring (S20→S21) still has under the of free (IV). , our into of coke the of bio-oil, which can be used for the and of anti- (V).
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I. “, the and of coke the (HDO) of bio-oil are based on .” to “In this study, we aimed to the and of coke the of bio-oil using (DFT) . , we out two paths to the coke of by DFT on the of and on Pt-Pd (111) (I). The rate- was the of the C-H (sp2) bond on the ring (S20→S21 and S24→S29).”
II. ” on the of six noble , we that the of C-H (sp2) bond on the ring (S20→S21) could be used as a of coke , which was in good with the TG of coke.” to “To the , we that the of C-H (sp2) bond on the ring (S20→S21) could be used as a of coke , which was in good with the (TG) of coke (II).”
III. “, the of free based on the , we found that the the rate- by 0.47 eV. Still, the the rate- by 0.60 eV.” to “, we found that the of the , such as the d-band and the of the , could be used as for the . Using these , we the of free and found that the the rate- by 0.47 eV, while the it by 0.60 eV (III).”
IV. “The of the atom on the ring and free , the of C-H (sp2) bond on the ring (S20→S21) still has under the of free .” to “Our of a the atom on
